Haiku, or: Haikai no ku

20 thoughts on “Haiku, or: Haikai no ku”

1. Nice!

   1. Thank you!

2. ha·​ku·​na ma·​ta·​ta | \ hä-ˈkü-nä-mä-ˈtä-tä
   Your haiku makes me smile
   Wish upon a star, maybe
   Just maybe a Haikai no ku
   Forms within in
   In the meantime
   there are no problems : don’t worry about it
   ha·​la | \ ˈhälə \

   1. ❤

      1. Thank you❤

3. love this!❤️

   1. Thanks, Cindy 😀

      The words came to me as I was falling asleep and luckily I remembered them when I woke up the morning!

      -David

      1. Oh I love hate that cuz, i then dream of hoping to remember, or wondering what they were. sometimes i reach for my journal and it’s fallen to the floor. Glad you remembered!! ❤️ a gem!

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4. ❤️❤️

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5. Love the message! I did a poetry reading tonight and we had a discussion about haikus. Reading yours is a perfect way to end my evening. 😄

   1. It was a fun write for me – it just sort of came to me out of the blue, and luckily I remembered the words well enough when I woke up the morning after falling asleep with this thought 😀

      -David

6. Great Haiku, David! One of the things I like most about poems is that they are open to multiple interpretations! “Seek your own within” is inspired! 🙂 I frequently have poems wake me up. I write a pencil draft, then try to go back to sleep! Take care. ❤

   1. Thanks, Cheryl 🙂

      I didn’t have time to write this one down – I just fell asleep hoping I wouldn’t forget it!

      -David

7. another way of saying what I said 🙂

   1. 🙂

      Great minds.

      1. i wrote it many years ago … 🙂

8. A great and open invitation Ben – a spirit of generosity.

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