My second attempt at ‘Magnetic Poetry’
I discovered the ‘Magnetic Poetry’ website via Kerfe and Jane, and it intrigued me. Honestly, I am still not entirely sure how I feel about this, but this 2nd poem (below) pleases me more than my 1st attempt.
For this, my 2nd poem, I decided to do away with the rule that I had arbitrarily set for myself last time, which was to make use of every single word I was given. Instead, I took Kerfe’s and Jane’s advice and cycled through the available word magnets, selecting only those that called out to my poetic muses.
beating heaving breasts beneath
enormous purple moon we trudge together
and scream through the blue mist
drunk on blood and death
shadows whisper in dream symphony
like wind of a thousand bitter moans
storming above still diamond waters
of rocky black sea love
The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
I absolutely love this!
Thanks so much โค
-David
I think you used the words really quite beautifully & have put together a lovely piece. I really like each line to be honest, I saw beauty in all of it ๐๐น
Amirah,
That is truly very sweet of you to write. Thank you.
Yours,
David
Your welcome David ๐๐น
This looks like so much fun!
it is ๐
Thanks!
David
This is another hit for me. Loving this magnetic poetry thing in your hands; you manage it very well. :))
are you tempted to give it a go? ๐
I tried but the website didn’t work in my browsers. I could see the words but when I clicked them nothing happened. :))
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I will leave it to you David. :)) Though I was a bit p’o’d since I was clicking away thinking I’d made something brilliant but alas nothing was registered/saved. ;)) ๐
I just ended up taking a screen shot.
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Ah ok. Just wrote/typed them down outside the app/web page? Got it. Guess I was a bit lazy in that moment! ๐