My 2nd ‘Magnetic Poem’ haiku
lonely stroll about
the soul's full rustling colors
could seed poetry
Notes
- I am sticking with the ‘Nature Poet’ virtual magnet set for now because it’s the least comfortable for me to use;
- Yesterday, I wrote my first ‘Magnetic Poem’ haiku, using this same set;
- To be honest, I am not usually much for haikus, but this exercise feels very productive; and I am deliberately sticking with the haiku form;
- I find myself especially pleased with this particular poem.
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It certainly could! I am enjoying your nature poems David: a new angle…
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You might be interested in this weekβs poetry challenge…
oh? pray tell?
Hint: *nature poetry π€«
Lovely poem! Magnetic poetry sounds wildly intriguing.
in fact, ‘wild’ was one of the magnet word options!
Hey David…lovely haiku! Very poetic π
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Really lovely Haiku David… ‘The souls full rustling colours’ beautiful ππΉ
Much love, Amirah.
Thank you!
I love this! The soul planting poetry’s seeds…a lovely image.π
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This one you should be proud of David! Deep.
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Beautiful David.
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magnitized to your beautiful Haiku David!ππππππ
Thank you so much, Cindy π
You’re most welcome! π
This poem reads like one where you were free to roam, or stroll (haha) with your words, not confined by a random selection. I clicked on your magnetic link. Hope you get a few cents. haha
Is the goal to use only the words you are given?
Michele – it’s just a fun link I discovered; I don’t get anything for sharing it π
The “goal” is whatever you want it to be. You can always click the button on the lower right for more words – you’ll see that it cycles you through a finite list of them. I tried using all the words the first time I did this, but that didn’t work as well as I would have liked… I’m finding that picking out only the words that speak to me brings better results.
Yours,
David
I was teasing about the two cents. π But, you should! Thank you for the explanation and for sharing what has worked for you. A fun writer’s resource. π
I’ve taken a look on the small screen but think I need to look at it on the big screen.
yes, it’s easier if you have more space to work with on the screen!
David, your beautiful haiku prompted me to have a go and create my first – with the original kit. Had to type copy into wp post (see there). I take it you may have taken a screen shot; too complicated for me, but anyhow… π
I adore it. I am sticking your magnetic poetry all over my mind’s fridge. :))
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It could!! (K)
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David, I love this haiku! Inspiring. β€
Thanks, Cheryl π
This is lovely! Haiku are harder to do well than many realize…
Interestingly, the limitations of these magnets somehow make it easier for me to write these nature haikus, Muri!
-David
It’s beautiful
Thank you so much, E β€
-David
I’ve always wanted a magnetic poetry set
Erica, I didn’t before, but I do now! π
-David