A ‘Magnetic Poem’ haiku
Wanna try? Click here.
winter wind rustles full freshly frosted flower in the soon spring sun
Notes
- I am still sticking with the ‘Nature Poet’ virtual magnet set and with the haiku form because I remain uncomfortable with these;
- Having said that, this particular haiku came together fairly quickly for me (well, relatively);
- It seems (although I could be mistaken) that the magnets available in each virtual set remain the same every week…
Master of alliteration, you. Very nice!
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I like this haiku. And I think I will give the magnetic poem a try. It looks interesting. Thank you for the tips.
But we don’t have to use all of the words provided, right? Or is it the challenge is to use up all of those words?
Erlyn, the only rules are those that you set for yourself. The first time I played with this, I didn’t realize that there was a button at the bottom right, which allows you to cycle through all of the magnets in the set.
I decided that first time to use all of the magnets on my screen, but I wasn’t very satisfied with the result. After that, I decided to only use those magnets that “spoke” to me, and I began cycling through all of the available magnets for a broader range of word options. I’ve been fairly happy with my Magnetic Poems since then 🙂
Yours,
David
Thanks.
Tzvi,
My pleasure 😁
-David
the soon spring sun–exactly! (K)
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I love your word arrangement – would make a nice flower arrangement too. haha
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I should give these a try…
If you do, please share the link with me, Muri!
-David
Nice, just the right amount of repeated first letters, which can sometimes prove overpowering when overdone. ❤
Happy spring, David!
Thanks, Cheryl 💛
fun learning about magnetic poems. love this one
Thanks, Cindy ❤
I am loving the alliterations with your magnetic poetry ❤️❤️
I am really drawn to alliteration for some reason, Diana 😀
Thank you for noticing. ❤
You really wowing this magnetic poetry! Kudos🙌
Thanks, Sangeetha – it’s not my wheelhouse, but it’s really fun 😁
Yours,
David
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Lovely… Your doing great with the magnetic poems 🙂🌹
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This is so interesting 😀
So are there any rules, do we have to consume all magnetic pieces into a poem, our we can use only as many as we want?
Deb, the only rules are those that you set for yourself. The first time I played with this, I didn’t realize that there was a button at the bottom right, which allows you to cycle through all of the magnets in the set.
I decided that first time to use all of the magnets on my screen, but I wasn’t very satisfied with the result. After that, I decided to only use those magnets that “spoke” to me, and I began cycling through all of the available magnets for a broader range of word options. I’ve been fairly happy with my Magnetic Poems since then 🙂
Yours,
David
That makes it easier David, thanks 🙂 I took a first look and found the concept great! Then there were too many words which I couldn’t place anywhere.
Nice interesteing tool, I think I will pass to me daughter too, to see if I could get her to compose something!
Nice. I can picturise it.
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Awesome 👏
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