A ‘Magnetic Poem’ haiku
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green moss river winds over earthly ancient brown for bright breezy blue
Notes
- For this poem, I stuck with the ‘Nature Poet’ virtual magnet set and with the haiku form again because they are outside of my wheelhouse;
- Still, having said that, this is definitely getting easier for me;
- Also, if the virtual magnets do remain the same every week, I might switch to another set and/or form… we’ll see.
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Love the fact that you are experimenting with these so well!
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Have you tried it?
-David
Yes, I did. Should post it on my blog by tomorrow. Thanks for the introduction to it!
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Here it is – https://rahulgaurblog.com/2021/02/24/404-never-meant-to-be-magnetic-poem/
I love the layering going on in this poem. Each line has a distinctly different mood, that overall, has a pleasant rhythmic sound.
Thanks, Michele!
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Beautiful David, really nice haiku. “Over early ancient brown” gorgeous ๐๐น
Thank you, Amirah!
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David