Green, Brown, or: Blue

Posted on February 22, 2021March 1, 2021 by ben Alexander

A ‘Magnetic Poem’ haiku

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green moss river winds
over earthly ancient brown
for bright breezy blue

Notes

For this poem, I stuck with the ‘Nature Poet’ virtual magnet set and with the haiku form again because they are outside of my wheelhouse;
Still, having said that, this is definitely getting easier for me;
Also, if the virtual magnets do remain the same every week, I might switch to another set and/or form… we’ll see.

42 thoughts on “Green, Brown, or: Blue”

Rahul Gaur February 23, 202114:43

Love the fact that you are experimenting with these so well!
1. ben Alexander February 23, 202114:47
  
  Thanks, Rahul 🙂
  
  Have you tried it?
  
  -David
  1. Rahul Gaur February 23, 202114:49
    
    Yes, I did. Should post it on my blog by tomorrow. Thanks for the introduction to it!
    1. ben Alexander February 23, 202114:54
      
      😀
      1. Rahul Gaur February 24, 202117:12
        
        Here it is – https://rahulgaurblog.com/2021/02/24/404-never-meant-to-be-magnetic-poem/
Michele Lee February 23, 202106:08

I love the layering going on in this poem. Each line has a distinctly different mood, that overall, has a pleasant rhythmic sound.
1. ben Alexander February 23, 202109:28
  
  Thanks, Michele!
  
  💚
  🤎
  💙
silent poetry February 23, 202104:07

Beautiful David, really nice haiku. “Over early ancient brown” gorgeous 🙂🌹
1. ben Alexander February 23, 202108:27
  
  Thank you, Amirah!
  
  💚
  David

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