Jagged, or: Tender

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‘Edges and Fringes’ โ€“ a dโ€™Verse poetics prompt

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Papa,
can you
visit us
from the unknowable beyond
to hearten us, for we miss
you
so
and griefโ€™s jagged edges cut us
even as the edges of mortal life are
clear
to us
remaining, as we do, on this side
living; broken; aching 		Boy,
hear me
in dreams
I call
you
every night, all night
tenderly, I watch over you
With love
glowing
and reaching out to inspire you
from beyond the very fringes
of life
to believe…

The prompt

The above poem is my take on dโ€™Verseโ€™s โ€˜Edges and Fringesโ€™ prompt.

Our mission was to spark on one of these paths, and I primarily found my way along the 1st and 3rd paths:

  1. Write a poem using the word edge;
  2. Write a poem that keeps Millikinโ€™s question in mind:
    • What is the word, the line, that cuts, that can show that edge?
  3. Write a poem using the word fringe;
  4. Write a poem from the fringe, however you define it.

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