My first Cyrch a Chwta
Girl, from the first it's been true
your sweetness surpassed all who
poop, cry and coo, as babes do.
Watching you skip at the zoo;
you bathing, smearing shampoo;
laughing at Winnie the Pooh...
Since the hour that you were born,
every morn, faith soars anew.
A lovely poem of parenthood!
I just read it to Liorah. She approves. 🥰
Then it’s a success!
This is so sweet!
Thank you so much, Plaka!
🥰
David
Ahaha! This is funnily adorable. 😂🙌💕
p.s. did it pass your daughter’s approval?
yes, and she hugged me and asked me to repeat it 👧
Aw that’s sweet. Did she laugh?
😀 no, no laughter – just some cheering and then some serious questions about what various words and phrases mean
Hmmm. :)) Yes guess that’s what I was thinking – might be funny to parents but maybe confusing to kids. Especially with an unfamiliar image. But yay for the cheering! And the vocab learning. :)) 🙌
💚Lia💚
How lovely! ❤️❤️ Parenthood is beautifully penned. I love this David.
Thanks so much, Preeths
🧡
David
This is wonderful – in the content and theme as well as execution. I will probably never attempt it due to that dratted internal rhyme!
there’s only one this time, Muri
🙂
David
This is so cute. Almost like chancing upon a baby’s photo album. 💜
Yes❣️ That’s how I imagined it too, Shruba.
All best,
David
Very disappointed you did not write in Welsh, but I see far too many vowels!
There are limits to what I can do, Pete 🙃
Yours,
David
I feel something new about the poem. It is cool and entertaining. You have picturised the baby girl very well. Every father is proud of his daughter.🤗👍
Ideally, yes, Lokesh, but, sadly, not always 😦
Sincerely,
David
You should recognise it generally.
Beautiful photograph!
Reminds me of Kabuliwallah: a short story by Rabindranath Tagore.
Thanks for teaching me about that, Chandrita 🙂
Yours,
David
Chandrita,
The photo is just a free image that I found online ~ but I think it looks cute 😀
Yours,
David
This is the truth
Amen, Sayri.
❤
David
Tnx
A beautiful, personal take on a universal human experience, David. Love it! ❤ I am glad your daughter enjoyed the poem. 🙂 Take care.
Thanks so much as always, Cheryl. How are you doing?
Yours,
David
Aww..the eyes, windows to the soul.
Ashim,
That’s very sweet of you to say.
Thank you!
David
Haha..my pleasure David.
Precious! The connection and love grows and grows.
💓💓💓
😍Michele😍
Much ado
About little loo
And what I find most endearing is the unconventional photo accompanying the eight-lined kirch a choota.
Well, I just took the first image of a father and daughter I found, which looked cute ❤
Apt first find
Aw..this is a beautiful write!
Thanks, D., as always, you are very kind.
💗
David
Of course!
Awwww🤗🤗🤗
💞
oh for the love of a baby girl… we love them through and through all the stages of their miraculous existence! 💖
🤍🧒🏼🤍