Earth, or: Sky

Posted on March 24, 2021March 24, 2021 by ben Alexander

Please pass us over
Oh! We would be free of you
Spring air's above ground

16 thoughts on “Earth, or: Sky”

abvr March 25, 202106:11 Reply

Drift away, they look so lovely,
friendly and innocent as they wave goodbye
Both, Earth and Sky
1. ben Alexander March 25, 202107:39 Reply
  
  WOW, Abi❣️
  1. abvr March 25, 202108:46 Reply
    
    Happy it dazzled David
    1. ben Alexander March 25, 202109:07 Reply
      
      your kindness dazzles.
      1. abvr March 25, 202109:17 Reply
        
        🥂😚, thank you
murisopsis March 25, 202100:16 Reply

Killer haiku!
1. ben Alexander March 25, 202107:38 Reply
  
  🤍 Muri 🤍
JanBeek March 24, 202122:00 Reply

Quite awe-inspiring! ❤
1. ben Alexander March 25, 202107:36 Reply
  
  That is very sweet, Jan. Thank you 💚
  
  -David
filipamoreiradacruz March 24, 202120:40 Reply

WOW David! Heaven kisses Mother Earth. Thank you!
1. ben Alexander March 25, 202107:25 Reply
  
  Thank you, Filipa ❤
Lia March 24, 202117:37 Reply

Woah… deep, reflecting
underground waters.
🌱🌀👌
1. ben Alexander March 24, 202117:48 Reply
  
  💭 = ☝
Barbara S March 24, 202117:30 Reply

Oh, David. There it is again, the native language skill I’ll never have. So I have to hide behind Rose Auslander’s zen like style in her late poems (she wrote in her native language German, having been dissuaded by a friendly American poet to write in English). – The las line is splendid – muddles up all false sentimentality, one way or the other. Happy writing day!
1. ben Alexander March 24, 202117:46 Reply
  
  You are very kind, Barbara – I appreciate your support very much.
  
  Sincerely,
  David
  1. Barbara S March 25, 202103:56 Reply
    
    that’s certainly mutual, David. Only just noticed the dark poem on the election…

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