Sevenling (I am such)
My 1st sevenling
I am such a friggin' Jew; circumcised; born
in and residing in the capital of Israel; always,
always walking around with a yarmulke.
I don't compose poetry in Hebrew; I
don't hate; I have difficulty believing in my One
True God, let alone in any foreign ones.
I am just as different as I am.
I discovered the ‘sevenling’ form on Ron Lavalette’s blog, and I just had to give it a go! (this probably won’t be my last one)
Ah ha something to toy with, sevenling
I’m glad I could introduce you to it 😀
Yours,
David
I love readin your work. Missed reading you .
What’s the correct emoji for “Yassy is a sweet human”?
❤
David
Awwwww 🤗💖
[…] David fires off a poem that just stops me. He did it with his sevenling (another new form to me) I am such, and that prompted me to start this post. Then while still pondering that poem, he popped out […]
I love this. My favorite lines were “I am such a friggin’ Jew” and ” I have difficulty believing in my One / True God, let alone in any foreign ones.”
🤗 JYP 🤗
‘I am just as different as I am.’
Mind blown at that line! So loaded, so many possibilities/directions spinning from just 8 simple words! Love it!
Thanks so much, Sybo. I really appreciate your kind support!
Sincerely,
David
Your honesty and bravery to be vulnerable is commendable David! 🌷
Thanks so much for your kind support, Cindy. It means a great deal to me.
❤
David
You’re so welcome David!!! It’s so easy to dol