My 1st Shadorma
Snippet of ~
Of our sure, full love ~
Chirps above,
Silky gloves ~
Push could never come to shove,
For we're so in love
I was recently exposed to the shadorma form of poetry by Kerfe and Lauren. As always, I had to give it a go… this is definitely one of those short forms that challenges us to pack as much as possible into every word. Quite lovely, really – I enjoyed this one!
Note: the form need not rhyme.
The Skeptic's Kaddish 🇮🇱 
This is definitely lovely! I had no idea about this particular form. Good to know new stuff from you, as always 💜☺
Yeah, it’s super fun, Shruba ❤
Hi David, Thanks for sharing this form of poetry. It is new to me, and looks like something that I can work with.
I’m just passing it along, Mark – it was totally new to me too! 😀
Shabbat shalom,
David
I love this one. Every word does well in it. Yes this is what good love is like. Beautifully said David!
💕 Lia 💕
Those last 2 lines are great. It’s interesting that the rhymes aren’t obvious. I like that too. (K)
💝 Kerfe 💝