My 1st Shadorma
Snippet of ~
Of our sure, full love ~
Chirps above,
Silky gloves ~
Push could never come to shove,
For we're so in love
I was recently exposed to the shadorma form of poetry by Kerfe and Lauren. As always, I had to give it a go… this is definitely one of those short forms that challenges us to pack as much as possible into every word. Quite lovely, really – I enjoyed this one!
Note: the form need not rhyme.
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This is definitely lovely! I had no idea about this particular form. Good to know new stuff from you, as always ๐โบ
Yeah, it’s super fun, Shruba โค
Hi David, Thanks for sharing this form of poetry. It is new to me, and looks like something that I can work with.
I’m just passing it along, Mark – it was totally new to me too! ๐
Shabbat shalom,
David
I love this one. Every word does well in it. Yes this is what good love is like. Beautifully said David!
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Those last 2 lines are great. It’s interesting that the rhymes aren’t obvious. I like that too. (K)
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