Downward, or: Across

My 2nd tricube

What ~ if you
Should ~ read all
Poetry ~

In ~ more ways?
The ~ truth is
Real ~ in God's

World ~ but you
Look ~ past it
Like ~ a myth

I learned about the tricube form from Jenn Patino. How much meaning can we stuff into so few syllables? I love playing with these kinds of things!

17 thoughts on “Downward, or: Across”

  1. Ohooo…” look past it like a myth”
    Those words resonate deeply, for me.
    A deep idea to ponder.
    Really well done David.
    Thought provoking…๐Ÿ™

  2. Wow, this is very thought provoking and resonates. Great work, mesmerising! ๐ŸŒน

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