My 2nd tricube
What ~ if you Should ~ read all Poetry ~ In ~ more ways? The ~ truth is Real ~ in God's World ~ but you Look ~ past it Like ~ a myth
I learned about the tricube form from Jenn Patino. How much meaning can we stuff into so few syllables? I love playing with these kinds of things!
17 thoughts on “Downward, or: Across”
In answer to the question asked by your acrostic (super cool, btw) I think that actually, the real world should look like poetry!
Wouldn’t that be awesome? 😀
I like your response, JYP!
Trying to pack a punch in a paucity of words is always a challenge. You succeeded with this form and this poem.
Thanks, Muri 🙂
Nice Cadence Here. It struck at a deep level, needing to read a few times to see what is moving. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Dr. Maples.
Ohooo…” look past it like a myth”
Those words resonate deeply, for me.
A deep idea to ponder.
Really well done David.
Thanks, Suzette 🧸
I’m glad you enjoyed this one!
Yes, indeed. I enjoyed it. Thank you David. Peace🙏
Its amazing, loved your style 💖👏🏻👏🏻
Wow! Great wordplay. This is really witty!
Thanks so much, Nandika – I’m really glad that you enjoyed it❣️
I love the way you play with form and meaning here.
Thanks, Marieke – I try to keep myself from getting bored 😉
Wow, this is very thought provoking and resonates. Great work, mesmerising! 🌹
❤ Amber ❤