My 2nd tricube
What ~ if you
Should ~ read all
Poetry ~
In ~ more ways?
The ~ truth is
Real ~ in God's
World ~ but you
Look ~ past it
Like ~ a myth
I learned about the tricube form from Jenn Patino. How much meaning can we stuff into so few syllables? I love playing with these kinds of things!
The Skeptic's Kaddish 🇮🇱 
In answer to the question asked by your acrostic (super cool, btw) I think that actually, the real world should look like poetry!
Wouldn’t that be awesome? 😀
I like your response, JYP!
❤
David
Trying to pack a punch in a paucity of words is always a challenge. You succeeded with this form and this poem.
Thanks, Muri 🙂
Nice Cadence Here. It struck at a deep level, needing to read a few times to see what is moving. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Dr. Maples.
Yours,
David
Ohooo…” look past it like a myth”
Those words resonate deeply, for me.
A deep idea to ponder.
Really well done David.
Thought provoking…🙏
Thanks, Suzette 🧸
I’m glad you enjoyed this one!
Yes, indeed. I enjoyed it. Thank you David. Peace🙏
Its amazing, loved your style 💖👏🏻👏🏻
Thanks, Soni❣️
-David
Wow! Great wordplay. This is really witty!
Thanks so much, Nandika – I’m really glad that you enjoyed it❣️
Yours,
David
I love the way you play with form and meaning here.
Thanks, Marieke – I try to keep myself from getting bored 😉
❤
David
Wow, this is very thought provoking and resonates. Great work, mesmerising! 🌹
❤ Amber ❤