Frantic whispers screaming stop, or: …

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why elaborate?
frantic whispers screaming stop
we like want need our
picture of a peachy life
as he beats her bloody raw


39 thoughts on “Frantic whispers screaming stop, or: …”

  1. Dear David,
    Thank you. The humanity which was taken away from me was given back in part by your poem. For that gift I can only offer my thanks and appreciation.

      1. Be happy, friend! It is a good thing to get it out into the light and feel like I am not completely thrown out of society and the world around me. I feel a little closer, a little less thrown out alone and that is precious.

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