Rock formations, or: Poetic structures

brilliance seeps through
irregular crevices
of sculpted structures

14 thoughts on “Rock formations, or: Poetic structures”

abigfatcanofworms April 21, 202110:37 Reply

Sounds like my brain! Except the brilliance is more irregular than the crevices (which are many). 😂. Sorry. It’s a lovely poem which aptly describes a beautiful photo!
1. ben Alexander April 21, 202110:39 Reply
  
  The brilliance can take many different forms, I imagine 🙂
DiosRaw April 21, 202112:03 Reply

Wonderful, deep and profound.
1. ben Alexander April 21, 202116:08 Reply
  
  🤍 Amber 🤍
Marieke Schreuder April 21, 202113:24 Reply

I love the way you use the metaphor here. Wonderful!
1. ben Alexander April 21, 202116:10 Reply
  
  💜 Marieke 💜
murisopsis April 21, 202116:02 Reply

The structure funnels the creativity creating a piercing brilliance – both the poetry and the rocks…
1. ben Alexander April 21, 202116:11 Reply
  
  💞 Muri 💞
Susan Strasser, Blogger & Memoirist April 21, 202116:16 Reply

Wow!
1. ben Alexander April 21, 202116:21 Reply
  
  ✨🙏✨ Susan ✨🙏✨
Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet April 22, 202100:55 Reply

Gorgeous! Beautiful cave and poem! ❤ Have a great day, David! ❤
1. ben Alexander April 22, 202111:03 Reply
  
  🤍 Cheryl 🤍
Lesley April 22, 202112:27 Reply

The brilliance of the light reveals the beauty of the rocks. An intriguing haiku, David.
1. ben Alexander April 22, 202112:34 Reply
  
  🙏 Lesley 🙏