A ‘Magnetic Poem’ tanka
mother and father
always belonged together
their child remembers
moments of joy, tears, and heart
night takes life, but can't touch love
Notes
- For this poem, I decided to make use of the ‘Love Set’ on the Magnetic Poetry website;
- I think this is a brand new set of virtual magnets because I noticed it for the very first time tonight when I visited the Magnetic Poetry website!
- I once again opted for a tanka, rather than a haiku;
- The extra two lines (14 syllables) provide a greater challenge, as well as a larger canvas;
- This particular poem is something of a reflection on my memories of my parents and my childhood in the context of my Papa’s death nearly three years ago;
- I searched for and found the featured image only after I had written the entire tanka.
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A loving tribute to their/your family love. ❤️ With found words! Very sweet.
💝 Michele 💝
Again you are marvelous with the magnetic words… I might just have to give these a try!
*heheheheheh*
Poignant and so true!
❤ ❤ Ingrid ❤ ❤
I must be a bit maudlin because this one makes me weeping. True
Wow. Not that I want you to feel sad, Andrew, but I’m glad my words could touch you. Thank you. I am humbled.
❤
David
David how swift you fly,I have just sent that to you. Yes maudlin
❤ Andrew ❤
This is so beautiful and true. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks, Anna! ❤
-David
‘Night takes life, but can’t touch love.’ Those are moving words to hold onto.
Thanks so much, MH ❤
Sincerely,
David
a very beautiful poem!
💖 Worms 💖
How achingly beautiful, David🌻🌷❤️
💗 Diana 💗
Beautiful and so true! 🙂 I still love everyone I have ever loved, living or dead. ❤ Have a great week, David!
💖 Cheryl 💖
Beautiful tribute. ❤❤
🤍 Jeff 🤍