Jerusalem sky
twilight gashes; mauve and peach
soon to disappear
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The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
Really beautiful photograph and poem David. Hugs, Joni
โค Joni โค
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Awesome mesmerized Sky ๐๐น๐
Thattamma, I thought so too ๐
That’s why I took the photo!
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David
There the sky more beautiful ๐๐ท๐๐ท
Great Capture
โค Thank so much, Mercy โค
Yours,
David
My pleasure David ๐๐
Gorgeous all around, David. โค๏ธ
Lovely haiku! Such a great way to capture a special moment.
Thanks so much, Anna โค
Yours,
David
such beauty in your lines and the sky David!
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๐ Thanks, Cindy ๐
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You pull me into this dusk with a slash – a reverse birth as I crawl into the night womb!
๐ Muri ๐
Gashes is such a good word choice here!
Thanks, JYP ๐
A beautiful poem, David. ‘Twilight gashes’ – yes, it really does gash the sky with those gorgeous colours. Such a fleeting moment of joy!
๐ค Lesley ๐ค
Gorgeous.
๐ค Thanks, Amber ๐ค
โ Soon to disappear, โ should I take it in normal way or Is their any different meaning of this line?
Lokesh, as Edgar Degas once said, “Art is not what you see, but what you make others see.”
So the real question is ~ what does it mean to you?
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David
Yeah! Please answer it. What does it mean to?
sorry – that was a typo. I meant to write: “what does it mean to you?”
because that’s what actually matters.
You have described evening of the Jerusalem in your poem. It flows well.
Evening > Twilight > Night
That is the way I experienced it too ๐
My papa is sick. And I have just lost my bade papa (one of my father’s elder brother). So, the situation here is critical. I’m a bit comfortable.
In the morning I went to hospital to meet my father. Along the way I saw everything is closed. Humans are living in the fear inside their houses. You just see a few policeman’s standing on the main road, monitoring everything.
I’m so sorry, Lokesh ๐ฆ
No need to say sorry. I shared with you because I know how much you love your father.
Lokesh,
I read this poem (also a haibun) today –
https://transitionofthoughts.com/2021/04/26/visualizing-an-apocalypse/
It’s about the COVID-19 situation in India.
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David
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I’m soooo sorry as well Lokesh… sending love and prayers.
Thanks Cindy๐ค
You’re so welcome…. take good care!๐ท๐