Medi-tative, or: Calm-ing

Sit-
ting here,
con-
sider-
ing my words,
while count-
ing
all my
syllables
is fairly re-
laxing for
me. Al-
most
medi-
tative, I
would say.
Waves
are calm-
ing.

32 thoughts on “Medi-tative, or: Calm-ing”

1. I break up words for syllable count often, but I don’t generally use hyphens. They add to your verse though, and do slow it down into a gentle rhythm. (K)

   1. I was just trying to work with the form, Kerfe… and hyphens felt natural to me. Maybe I was not brave enough yet to split up words in a less conformist way 🙂

      1. I think the way you did it was just right for the feeling you were trying to create.

2. Can’t even explain why, mate, but I love this. It IS calming. Ha!

   1. 😁 George 😁