A palinode to: ‘Shabbat, or: The Sabbath’
Fuck that noise; Sabbath law annoys girls and boys who want toys; They're denied their simple joys; Onus ~ faith destroys
Write a palinode
A palinode or palinody is an ode or song that retracts or recants a view or sentiment to what the poet wrote in a previous poem.
The d’Verse writing challenge is to write a palinode. This can be in relation to a poem you have written before (please link or include prior poem), or as part of poem.
The poem of mine to which I wrote this palinode is called: ‘Shabbat, or: The Sabbath’
Shabbat, or: The Sabbath
She draws me; Jews' age-old decree; Through her we are set free for our holy day weekly ~ we simply can be
I don’t blog on Shabbas (the Sabbath)
According to most traditional interpretations of Jewish religious law, Jews are forbidden from using electronic devices (such as computers, cell phones, etc.) on the Sabbath. This has its benefits and its drawbacks.
You can read more on this here: I don’t blog on Shabbas (the Sabbath)