36 thoughts on “The clouds, or: Branches”

  1. Well done! I enjoyed the flutter and am impressed you did a butterfly cinquain as a concrete poem to boot! You are a poet after my own heart (combining several forms into one)!

    1. I’m glad you enjoyed it, Srikanth!

      Please feel free to call me ‘David’. That is my first name.
      In Hebrew, the word ‘ben’ simply means ‘son of’.


  2. Very atmospheric my friend! I want to thank you for always supporting my site, my first book was just released and I’d like to give you a free ebook copy, if you are interested.

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