“The more you know, the more you grow”
Before I began writing poetry online last year, I’d never heard of a tanka, let alone a renga. Once I came to understand the concept of a tanka, I started responding to other poets’ haikus on their blogs occasionally, to show my appreciation.
I have long been incredibly impressed with Sangeetha’s (‘Mindfills’ blog) writing, which magically and seemingly effortlessly weaves multiple poetry prompts together. If I had more time, I would probably attempt to complete all of her haikus, out of my sheer excitement. In any case, on April 4th, ~1.5 months ago, I responded to a particularly enchanting poem of hers, which she wrote as follows (my [response] is bracketed & bolded):
touched by a moonbeam tranquil lake shivers silver ~ripples reach my ears [listening closely, I hear lowest hanging clouds murmur]
To my surprise, Sangeetha responded to my response, thereby launching our 1st renga partnership (previous to that I hadn’t even known that rengas existed); and we completed our 20th verse just two days ago! We shall be continuing ‘Ripples’, and we’ll also be exploring further opportunities for collaboration. For me, this has been an incredibly fun and fulfilling new experience.
touched by a moonbeam tranquil lake shivers silver ~ripples reach my ears [listening closely, I hear lowest hanging clouds murmur] hanging clouds murmur mischief firing up some fun ~pillow fight follows [sudden unexpected kiss below falling down feathers] falling down feathers caressing cherry blossoms ~April rain showers [shivering streams of silver matting our hair as we dance] as we dance all night starlight splattering on souls ~ summer sighs softly [as time's tender tendrils tug temptingly towards autumn] autumn always clicks photographs in sepia ~ I'm thinking of us [thoughts flurry in photographs like snow in the negatives] a flurry of snow when wayward winter winds whoosh in a gust of glee [off-grid up in the mountains renga partnership on pause] partnership on pause winter ice and summer sun ~ melt to meet again [rivulets rush rapidly flowing freely together] rushing rivulets rumba in rugged rhythm ~ rapture on the run [grrrowling in utter delight bear cubs wrestle on the banks] wrestling bear cubs laugh catching snowflakes as they fall ~ into each other [mama bear splashes nearby ~ looks like fish for lunch again!] splashes nearby squirrels run helter-skelter bushy tails must dry [skittish fawns sip crisp water wise doe eyes big mama bear] fireflies flitter festive forest fairy lights fire up furry friends [finches flip-flapping for fun friendly ferrets frolic forth] tickled by a prank hedgehogs roll over laughing spraying pins on pines [distracted by silliness they struggle with their renga] waterfall of words wrapping wild winds of wonder ~ nature's poetry [animals caper through falls painted rainbow by the flow] through the waterfalls fireworks of colour sparkles rain rainbow showers [blue bear cubs, scarlet squirrels dance with dandelion deer] delicate dewdrop settles on slumbering sloth ~ waking up can wait [while white rabbit rushes by LATE for an important date] bouncing up the slopes bubbly bunny spots his date boldly beckoning [brown-eyed doe awaits white buck brunch first, followed by breeding] calling all creatures crickets rub their wings in glee commotion ensues [rabbits get separated date delayed by disturbance] wild winds whirl westward sweeping willow off her feet ~ bending all the rules [long leaves largely lie lengthwise tree trunk uprooted and torn] snow white owlet wakes perches high on broken branch eyes wide open now [violet voles, mauve mice hide; lavender lizard makes haste] slowly the skies clear streaming sunbeams serenely soothing nature's soul [silence, anticipation, shall subsequent stanzas soar?]
Now that I think about it… isn’t ‘Ripples’ a fantastic name for a joint renga?
42 thoughts on “Ripples, or: A renga partnership”
Personally I realized that staying in touch with fellow writers makes one understand the concept of others writings, so you have a good idea to write more poems
I 100% agree, Sanyu 🙂
It’s your honor
Wonderful nature 👌🙏 stunning beauty of the river 👍🏻🌹
I love especially the personification of the natural world. Great partnership! (K)
David, great collaboration, partners very much in sync! Beautiful, flowing poetry! ❤ Looks like both of you are having fun! Take care!
❤ Thank you so much, Cheryl ❤
Ripples is a great name for joint renga David and so happy you are following your bliss❣️
😘 🤗 Cindy 🤗 😘
💖🤗 David 💗🤗
You do know Ingrid and I love when you do that❣️🤣🤣
I’ve been working on a Renga too! But this is the last week before my Renga partner leaves for North Carolina and has bowed out of the collaboration (new job, new home, new life – and a possible wedding to arrange = no time for poetry). Love that you found a collaborator!! Are you going to continue this Renga to the 36 verse standard of the Edo period or end at 20 verses for the Nijuin or maybe go for the Gojuin at 50 verses???
We’ve not yet decided when the end will be, but we’ll be continuing this one 😀
BTW, Muri, is your renga partner a blogger on WP?
Wow wow wow! That was an enchanting read! I especially loved
festive forest fairy lights
fire up furry friends
[finches flip-flapping for fun
friendly ferrets frolic forth]”
It’s a richly descriptive verse and the alliteration here is mind-blowing! ✨
🤎 Thanks, D.! 🤎