Hide, or: Go seek

it shall not suffice
seventeen clipp-d syllables
aren't enough to

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      1. I would like to be concise but comprehensible. I have trouble with both (much more so verbally than in writing)

  1. Senryu seventeen:
    Highest art attainable
    by short poet

    “We shall never understand one another until we reduce the language to seven words.” Kahlil Gibran

    1. Senryu seventeen:
      Highest art attainable
      by short poet
      Underappreciated
      but powerful and concise!

      BTW, that’s a fantastic quote – I think I’ll share it on my blog soon 🙂

      Thank you!
      David

      1. Thank YOU, David, for the inspiration of virtuosity to reach beyond my grasp.
        Btw, you’ll notice that the Khalil Gibran quote runs fourteen words in English; I like to think he said it in a shorter tongue. ; )
        Shalom
        Sum

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