Hide, or: Go seek

it shall not suffice
seventeen clipp-d syllables
aren't enough to

47 thoughts on “Hide, or: Go seek”

1. It’s hard to be concise, in both thinking and words. (K)

   1. my wife gets annoyed with me for my lack of verbal conciseness 😉
      (true story)

      1. I would like to be concise but comprehensible. I have trouble with both (much more so verbally than in writing)

2. Makes perfect sense, David, just like minimalist music.
   Yours,
   D

   1. I’m glad I make sense to you, Dolly – makes me feel like I’m not entirely crazy 🙂

      Yours,
      David

      1. Listen to John Cage’s music, when you have a chance, and you’ll see that you are not.
         Have a great day,
         D

3. Senryu seventeen:
   Highest art attainable
   by short poet

   “We shall never understand one another until we reduce the language to seven words.” Kahlil Gibran

   1. Senryu seventeen:
      Highest art attainable
      by short poet
      Underappreciated
      but powerful and concise!

      BTW, that’s a fantastic quote – I think I’ll share it on my blog soon 🙂

      Thank you!
      David

      1. Thank YOU, David, for the inspiration of virtuosity to reach beyond my grasp.
         Btw, you’ll notice that the Khalil Gibran quote runs fourteen words in English; I like to think he said it in a shorter tongue. ; )
         Shalom
         Sum

         1. 🙃 Sum 🙃

4. left me hanging… 🤣😻

   1. like this, Cindy? 🦥

      😆
      David

      1. 🤣🤣🤣
         Exactly❣️