Repaired, or: Ruptured

have you ever sighed
rupturing a hole within
which had nearly healed?

22 thoughts on “Repaired, or: Ruptured”

1. This is so beautiful! 🙂

2. Wow. Beautiful, David. ❤️

   1. 💖 Jeff 💖

3. I wonder if they are ever fully healed? (K)

   1. when I first wrote the poem I used the word ‘fully’ instead of ‘nearly’ and that didn’t feel right or true… so I went back and changed it after posting it to the blog 🙂

4. My goodness! That must have been a big sigh to open such a wound. I usually figure those reopened wounds have had the scabs picked at!!

   1. Yeah… it was. I’m definitely a “sigh’er”, so to speak.

5. Yes, many times!

   1. 💔 Gauri 💔

6. Nicely expressed. Indeed.

   1. Thank you so much, Sonya ❤

      -David

7. Sadly, yes I have. Nice job David.

   1. 💔 Lauren 💔

8. Yes, definitely! Wow poem, David! ❤

   1. 💔 Cheryl 💔

9. Whoa, deep!

   1. Yeah… I’ve been trying to break through… ⛏️
      Thanks, Angela

      ❤
      David

10. Yes!

    1. 😦 Kate 😦

       💔
       David

11. Powerful. Well penned!

    1. 🧸 Suzette 🧸

       1. You are most welcome David😊

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