Subtle, or: Suggestive

A senryū

I'd never speak that ___
I'd never even pen that ___
It's too explicit!

13 thoughts on “Subtle, or: Suggestive”

    1. A great part of the fun of forms is pushing the boundaries, Muri, as I’m sure you’d agree. In this one, I was wondering what it might look like if I stuck to the syllabic requirements but insinuated extra words that were not actually included in the count 🙂


      David

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