I’m rooting for the cat! Although I feel a bit bad for the crow
he was just hungry, is all ๐
Fun! Maybe a bit gross too. ๐
I will (attempt to) add one to the mix:
To the kitchen the vegan did strut; sheโll not be eating crow
At the chopping block is where sheโll be, cutting eggplant
Love learning new poetic forms from you! ๐
Michele, that’s super cute, but it’s not a schuttelreim because the final two words of the two lines don’t rhyme – they’re not a spoonerism…
โค
David
Thanks teach! I realized that after the fact. Guess I am eating crow, with a fork, not a spoon! ๐ Here is my modified attempt, with a rhyming couplet~
From the garden she grows her meal, she culls evermore
To the kitchen the vegan does strut; sheโll not be eating crow
Eating crow is a tough one.
The spoonerism would sound like – creeting owe, but that doesn’t mean anything… Not all words have workable spoonerisms.
Oh, got it! Yeah, I did pluck a tough one! I will just go chop some veggies now. ๐คช Thank you for the schuttelreim lesson. ๐
Much love to you, Michele ๐
Thank you. Same to you, David. ๐ I just read what I wrote, that doesn’t even rhyme. I should not attempt rhyming (or chopping) before I have had a cup of coffee. ๐คฃ My schuttelreim sucks, but it has been fun. ๐
I just didn’t want you to feel slighted by me!
Never! Critique away. I created a schuttelreim mess! ๐ I will try again. Later. After my cup of morning joe settles in.
It usually takes me 2!
Another one! You are on fire… but then I read the comment about doing them ahead. Still impressive and a real work out for the grey matter…
yep – I need to do 3 more in order to get a full week’s worth ๐
A crow? I’m not so sure about that. You need a rhyme for pigeon. (K)
I went to buy some cooking fat
And tripped over the flipping cat ๐น
The family friendly version doesnโt quite workโฆ
That’s awesome! ๐
BTW, I’m writing these because I want to get ahead in my #APoemADay game… so I wrote 7 gogyohkas for this week, now working on 7 schuttelreims for the following week… and then,… not sure yet.
Wow, you are really schutteling ahead ๐คฉ
Is that like cleaning your teeth five times a day for a week and then not cleaning them for 4 weeks? ๐
*laughing*
BTW, “fooking” seems tame enough to me ๐
I wasnโt sure ๐
Yum yum, though they never seem to sleep here, is that the same as eating crow? – No, not half as tasty
๐ด Crow. It’s what’s for dinner. ๐ด
‘Eating Crow’ be humiliated by having to admit one’s defeats or mistakes.
“the so-called experts will be eating crow tonight
I’m rooting for the cat! Although I feel a bit bad for the crow
he was just hungry, is all ๐
Fun! Maybe a bit gross too. ๐
I will (attempt to) add one to the mix:
To the kitchen the vegan did strut; sheโll not be eating crow
At the chopping block is where sheโll be, cutting eggplant
Love learning new poetic forms from you! ๐
Michele, that’s super cute, but it’s not a schuttelreim because the final two words of the two lines don’t rhyme – they’re not a spoonerism…
โค
David
Thanks teach! I realized that after the fact. Guess I am eating crow, with a fork, not a spoon! ๐ Here is my modified attempt, with a rhyming couplet~
From the garden she grows her meal, she culls evermore
To the kitchen the vegan does strut; sheโll not be eating crow
Eating crow is a tough one.
The spoonerism would sound like – creeting owe, but that doesn’t mean anything… Not all words have workable spoonerisms.
Oh, got it! Yeah, I did pluck a tough one! I will just go chop some veggies now. ๐คช Thank you for the schuttelreim lesson. ๐
Much love to you, Michele ๐
Thank you. Same to you, David. ๐ I just read what I wrote, that doesn’t even rhyme. I should not attempt rhyming (or chopping) before I have had a cup of coffee. ๐คฃ My schuttelreim sucks, but it has been fun. ๐
I just didn’t want you to feel slighted by me!
Never! Critique away. I created a schuttelreim mess! ๐ I will try again. Later. After my cup of morning joe settles in.
It usually takes me 2!
Another one! You are on fire… but then I read the comment about doing them ahead. Still impressive and a real work out for the grey matter…
yep – I need to do 3 more in order to get a full week’s worth ๐
A crow? I’m not so sure about that. You need a rhyme for pigeon. (K)
*giggle*
smidgen?
ok, Kerfe – here you go:
You honor me David.
It takes 2 to tango ๐๐บ
At least two.
Love this! ๐
๐ Lucy ๐
Ok hereโs my first attempt:
I went to buy some cooking fat
And tripped over the flipping cat ๐น
The family friendly version doesnโt quite workโฆ
That’s awesome! ๐
BTW, I’m writing these because I want to get ahead in my #APoemADay game… so I wrote 7 gogyohkas for this week, now working on 7 schuttelreims for the following week… and then,… not sure yet.
Wow, you are really schutteling ahead ๐คฉ
Is that like cleaning your teeth five times a day for a week and then not cleaning them for 4 weeks? ๐
*laughing*
BTW, “fooking” seems tame enough to me ๐
I wasnโt sure ๐
Yum yum, though they never seem to sleep here, is that the same as eating crow? – No, not half as tasty
๐ด Crow. It’s what’s for dinner. ๐ด
‘Eating Crow’ be humiliated by having to admit one’s defeats or mistakes.
“the so-called experts will be eating crow tonight
๐ Andrew ๐
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