Though it struck puss a smidgen pudgy... He thought the crow stout pigeon smudgy
The above crow-themed schuttelreim was inspired by Kerfe’s comment on an earlier schuttelreim I wrote, which went as follows:
The beast stole forward, creeping slow Soon puss would feast on sleeping crow
Kerfe’s response was:
A crow? I’m not so sure about that. You need a rhyme for pigeon. (K)
And the rest, as they say, is history.
17 thoughts on “Crow, or: Pigeon”
good job but everytime I read it I feel so sad for the pigeon. Maybe it’s all the birds I’m rescuing from my cats..
🥰 but I’m saving a lot 😝from my darn hunters
they’re not very happy with me tho.. 😂
This is great. Smiling!! (K)
🤗 I’m glad, Kerfe 🤗
You are welcome David. We all need a little cuteness to lift us up. So thank you.
🤗 Trâm 🤗
Absolutely adorable, subject and poem!
thanks so much 🙂
Quite interesting. Well done. 🙂
thanks! I’ve got two more schuttelreims to go to make 7, and then I’ll move on to something else 🙂
I love the history of this composition!
❤ Ingrid ❤
Funny response to that comment.
😀 Susan 😀