A schuttelreim
Though the rapper's flow, deft, didn't clot... (!Never!)
she, female, was mocked: You are NOT clever...
Thanks for putting up with my schuttelreims!
I’m done with these for now – I just wanted to write 7 poems in the same poetic form for a week’s worth of Twitter poetry… #APoemADay
Practice, practice, it is a way we learn! Keep up the good work. Your poems are inspiring to me, as is your willingness to share all manner of your writings. ๐
๐ค Hamish ๐ค
Thanks. That is very kind.
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David
Het that’s phat David, besides, some things need to be put up with.
yeah. they do – but I wish it were not so… and I hope for improvement…
thanks, Paul
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David
๐ Yes, if only it were not.
I’m sure that I could not come up with such clever turn about!
Ok. That’s kind, Muri, but having read your poetry for a while now, I’m SURE you could.
Much love,
David
I enjoyed it! Looking forward to the next form. (K)
โค Kerfe โค
Well I’d rather be Phat than Fatโฃ๏ธ
Yayyyy fun to watch you have fun and meet your goal๐๐๐
๐ Cindy ๐
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I enjoyed them. I didn’t “get” them but you are clearly having fun experimenting.
what did you not get? the form is all about formulating an intelligible spoonerism at the end of the two lines.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spoonerism
oh I read something about Spoonerisms the other day, but… whoosh ๐คฃ
Seems right up your alley, actually!
I used to live in Oxford, which would get plenty os tourists. You used to hera the French kids playing games with spoonerisms. It was fascination putting the original words back together in what was a foreign language anyhow. Of course, I was dog-slow.
I refuse to believe it!
berci meaucoup
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