My 2nd ukiah
(reverse haiku inspired by inverted photo)
zzub-zzub-zzubbing, azure-white
on pistil alight
blossom sweet, deep green delight
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of a son
Captivating photo and fun poem.
❤ Tanyeno ❤
Thanks,
David
Beautiful!
Thanks, James
❤
David
David, you’re so good at this. Never seen so much reversing at once. 🙂
💛 Thank you so much, Terveen 💛
What a fun poem and engaging photo! Take care, David! ❤
Since the haiku was reversed, I decided to invert the photo too 🤡
Thanks, Cheryl!
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David
An interesting form. I like the reversed buzz. (K)
the form doesn’t require the reversed buzz or the inverted photo – that was just my idea ❤
good ones, both
Zzub zzub zzub – lol
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True Pleasure, a potential renaissance for haiku!
awwww… Thanks, David!
❤
David
Fantastic, David. Love it. ❤️
💙 Jeff 💙
Pleasure will be! Beautiful David!
💗 Filipa 💗
A backward buzz?? Almost sounds as if this were a butterfly looking for a little drink… Perhaps a Common Blue butterfly?? Either way the butterfly is all business for my pleasure!
😆 it was meant to be an inverted butterfly 😆
Oops. I meant bee!
Beautiful!
So… pleasure then, Lucy? 😉
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David
I’d say so!
😍 Lucy 😍