oh the little
rebel
stomping his foot
denying denying
denying
au-tho-ri-ty
have a good day ๐
you too! โค
I like your verse above- especially with the photo; as I see it, it is a valid haiku; in any case ‘reversing haiku’ could at best only be based on a surface ‘understanding’ of the technique, at worst exorcising love for life, imho
I am def. not an authority on what is and what is not a haiku – I find the whole thing very confusing, but I am okay at following forms that other people have created… so if somebody created this and called the “shoobie doobie doo”, I would call it that – I don’t really care ๐
Who or what is holding that sky? Something to ponder. (K)
๐ดโ
perhaps
Very cool David..or should I say hot?๐น๐๐ด
๐ฅต Karima ๐ฅต
Heavy and hot thinking deep inside it’s light and fresh. I love your posts David! Thank you!
๐ Filipa ๐
I love this new take, David. Your poems are short, sweet, and packed with imagery.
โค thanks so much, Angela โค
I like this! Clever and beautiful.
๐ thanks, Lesley ๐
This is my first time hearing of a reverse haiku — and I like how it works together with the inverted photo.
Yeah, I found other people who had written reverse haikus, but the ukiah is actually even more reversed because it’s required to rhyme (which I like), and the idea of basing it on an inverted photo somehow just felt natural to me personally ๐
The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
oh the little
rebel
stomping his foot
denying denying
denying
au-tho-ri-ty
have a good day ๐
you too! โค
I like your verse above- especially with the photo; as I see it, it is a valid haiku; in any case ‘reversing haiku’ could at best only be based on a surface ‘understanding’ of the technique, at worst exorcising love for life, imho
I am def. not an authority on what is and what is not a haiku – I find the whole thing very confusing, but I am okay at following forms that other people have created… so if somebody created this and called the “shoobie doobie doo”, I would call it that – I don’t really care ๐
โค
David
they may be able to help
https://sites.google.com/site/worldhaikureview2/aboutworldhaikureview
Who or what is holding that sky? Something to ponder. (K)
๐ดโ
perhaps
Very cool David..or should I say hot?๐น๐๐ด
๐ฅต Karima ๐ฅต
Heavy and hot thinking deep inside it’s light and fresh. I love your posts David! Thank you!
๐ Filipa ๐
I love this new take, David. Your poems are short, sweet, and packed with imagery.
โค thanks so much, Angela โค
I like this! Clever and beautiful.
๐ thanks, Lesley ๐
This is my first time hearing of a reverse haiku — and I like how it works together with the inverted photo.
Yeah, I found other people who had written reverse haikus, but the ukiah is actually even more reversed because it’s required to rhyme (which I like), and the idea of basing it on an inverted photo somehow just felt natural to me personally ๐
Thanks, Dave!
โค
David