A [serious] limerick
Serious issues in limerick form
to this silly form don't well conform.
Though that being said,
perhaps it's all in my head,
my mindset informed by former norms?
Serious issues in limerick form
to this silly form don't well conform.
Though that being said,
perhaps it's all in my head,
my mindset informed by former norms?
This poem is so enjoyable, thank you for sharing!
๐ ๐ Amelia ๐ ๐ ~ thanks!
Hear, hear!
๐ Punam ๐
Now…always! Never is too late.
๐ Filipa ๐
That last line resonates so much it’s almost a blanket statement to describe a good majority of people. Clever write!
Thanks, D. ๐ I always aspire towards cleverness!
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David
Nicely done! The poet’s best hope, perhaps is to push the boundaries of poetic form in an effort to describe life’s limitless possibilities.๐๐๐
โจ๐งธโจ Suzette โจ๐งธโจ
My pleasure, David๐
There is such prominent assonance in this wonderful poem, sounds almost as a tongue twister!๐
๐ค Garima ๐ค
I think I actually followed that. Nice job David.
๐ I am certain you did, Lauren ๐
Excellent David!
๐ฅฐ Gabriela ๐ฅฐ
xoxo
You have turned the limerick on its head! If all limericks were like this perhaps I’d want to write them… Maybe that’s why I prefer the Spanish Quintain!
Yeah, limericks have quite the reputationโฃ๏ธ
I love it!
Thanks, Sam
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David
Love this, David. Watch out for those nasty former norms! ๐
Right?
Bloody brilliant.
๐ Melissa ๐
Thanks!
David