A [serious] limerick
Serious issues in limerick form
to this silly form don't well conform.
Though that being said,
perhaps it's all in my head,
my mindset informed by former norms?
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of a son
Hear, hear!
💚 Punam 💚
Now…always! Never is too late.
💜 Filipa 💜
That last line resonates so much it’s almost a blanket statement to describe a good majority of people. Clever write!
Thanks, D. 🙂 I always aspire towards cleverness!
❤
David
Nicely done! The poet’s best hope, perhaps is to push the boundaries of poetic form in an effort to describe life’s limitless possibilities.👍👍😊
✨🧸✨ Suzette ✨🧸✨
My pleasure, David😊
There is such prominent assonance in this wonderful poem, sounds almost as a tongue twister!😃
🤗 Garima 🤗
I think I actually followed that. Nice job David.
😄 I am certain you did, Lauren 😄
Excellent David!
🥰 Gabriela 🥰
xoxo
You have turned the limerick on its head! If all limericks were like this perhaps I’d want to write them… Maybe that’s why I prefer the Spanish Quintain!
Yeah, limericks have quite the reputation❣️
I love it!
Thanks, Sam
❤️
David
Love this, David. Watch out for those nasty former norms! 🙂
Right?
Bloody brilliant.
💖 Melissa 💖
Thanks!
David