A ukiah
(reverse haiku inspired by inverted photo)
fishing raft members flourish
blushing depths nourish
as one, up and down they swish
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The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
Your readers think you’re talking about ocean animals but I know better. What you’re really talking about is Faust from the Guilty Gear series.
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Dang, you got me, Ben!
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David
I love all the sh sounds. I can see them moving. (K)
๐ฌ Kerfe ๐ฌ
A pleasing rhythm and depth. Your words swish about too. ๐
๐งก Terveen ๐งก
I’m really loving all of these! I had finalized my August scavenger hunt prompt list and this is making me want to revise it!
๐ฅฐ Muri ๐ฅฐ
โค๏ธ This works well for me because the last line is a near-rhyme, so it feels unforced. BTW, how do find all these short and unusual forms?
Thanks, Misky ๐
There’s no particular way that I find these forms – I just look at various poetry websites.
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David
P.S. rhyming is a ukiah requirement ๐
Good one, David. You write spectacular lines. ๐ค๐
๐ง Yassy ๐ง