Raft, or: Waddle

A ukiah

(reverse haiku inspired by inverted photo)

fishing raft members flourish
blushing depths nourish
as one, up and down they swish

13 thoughts on “Raft, or: Waddle”

  1. ❀️ This works well for me because the last line is a near-rhyme, so it feels unforced. BTW, how do find all these short and unusual forms?

    1. Thanks, Misky πŸ™‚
      There’s no particular way that I find these forms – I just look at various poetry websites.

      πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ
      David

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