A lune
I feel beleaguered
by pithy
pressing piercing thoughts
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I make the distinction between marrow and pulp… Marrow being the essential for maintaining blood cell production and pulp being the macerated inner pith of a plant used for production of paper products… one is needed for sustaining the life of the body and the other (used to) for sustaining the life of the mind….This lune has layers!
I usually go for layers ๐
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David
In one ear and out the other is my advice. (K)
๐ฅฐ Kerfe ๐ฅฐ
sounds like a tricky form here David!!!! ๐คทโโ๏ธ
๐งก Cindy ๐งก
oppressive
I was actually thinking of using that word in my poem!
go right ahead
when waking with
oppressing thoughts –
listening out for owl
this is actually a mini haibun from my own experience which goes something like this:
1.) identify the thoughts as opposed to my embodied values/hope,
2.) thus give them a frame,
3.) describe them as close to actual sensation (not thought about thought)
thanks for inspiration ๐
well done, Barbara โค
then there is always the warning ‘do as I say…’ ๐
Very inspiring lines ๐๐ท over thinking not good ๐น life is all about piece of mind ๐๐ป๐ท๐๐
haha – I don’t know whether you intended the double meaning there, yes peace of mind above everything, best achieved by giving my readers a piece of my mind ๐ thanks! – made my breakfast!
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The lines โ I feel beleaguered ….
so that I gave comment this ๐๐ป๐๐
โค thanks, Thattamma โค
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Does the limitation of this form make you feel a bit luney? I think I would. ๐
very much so ๐
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๐ good starting point for writing no?
reminds me of the intro theme for a cartoon I watched as a child – see video below (first few seconds includes the word “looney”)
(( )) am a child at heart, no need to tell me twice ๐