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Whenever I compose verses \ based on my perception of the truth, I'm always wondering \ whether they themselves are the ones creating \ the reality they're describing


It’s no wonder that truth is stranger than fiction. Fiction has to make sense.
–Mark Twain (1835-1910)
Interesting thought…
I’m an artist first (though not a very successful one, I’m sorry to say) but I’ve also been writing stories for decades. I also began delving into creating comics and while working on one I realized something. It felt as if my characters had taken on lives of their own and I was just the schmuck who was sitting there taking dictation. I fought it at first, “No! I don’t want you to do that! You need to do this!” Eventually I just gave up and said, “Yeah, just do whatever you want, I’ll just draw it out and write dialogue, you guys take the spotlight, whatever…” That’s what this reminded me of. My characters seem to start creating their own realities and I’m just there to write down what’s happening. That’s how it feels, anyway. You put what I’ve been feeling into words perfectly!
Have you, by any chance, seen the movie ‘The Thirteenth Floor’?
https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0139809/
I would highly recommend it to you ๐
โค
David
I haven’t, but I will be! Thanks for the suggestion! ๐
it’s a bit of a mind-bender ๐
That’s my type of movie!
๐ฟ๐ฅ if you end up watching it, let me know what you think of it…
โค
David
Oh I will! I’m a huge move fan. If I can find it, I’ll watch it! ๐
This one! Hit me
๐ป Madhavi ๐ป
-David
I know this quote and love it, David. It always sends my mind in the direction of Kierkegaard, especially his dialogues with Hegel, and so does your poem. If we were to believe Kierkegaard, then our minds create our reality, and your verses are certainly products of your mind, ergo your question is answered.
Hooray – now I know the truth! ๐
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David
Glad to have dispelled confusion.
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Hitting the nail on the head. (K)
๐ค Kerfe – thanks ๐ค
What a GREAT quote!
Thanks. It just came at the right moment as I have to record a podcast and being interviewed about truth on Monday evening.
Thanks a lot
Klausbernd ๐
๐ Klausbernd ๐
Yeah – it really speaks to me too!
Thanks,
David
Dear David,
you are very welcome
The Fab Four of Cley
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good luck and keep it grounded ๐
Thank you
The Fab Four of Cley
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Now this is a brain-twister. The creation is doing its own job itself. Wonderful. ๐
๐งก Terveen, thank you ๐งก
I wish my fiction becomes truth.
Right? I wish!
โค
David
Our inside the heart some truth we hiding , this is reality and we accept it โ ๐๐ท
My comment ๐๐๐ป๐ฅ
โค Thattamma โค
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I try and never succeed in forming reality to my expectations. That’s why writing poetry is so satisfying!
๐ I so agree, Muri ๐
whatever is truth
when you are not
saying it
thanks for the inspiration,David. Shabat Shalom
Shabbat shalom! โค
before I forget David, this may be of interest:, ultimately also for the poet you are… a retired prof of religious studies, Darrell J Fasching, The Ethical Challenge of Auschwitz and Hiroshima. I have only scanned the 9 pages I could find on google so far, but there he says his concern is that religions can bring about evil as well as good – and if I understand correctly, one finding is the danger lies in separating sacral from secular and one of his suggested solutions the routes of Tolstoy, Gandhi an MLK Jr – civil disobedience, A quote that fascinated on p8 was humans have the potential to create new worlds… (he calls it utopian which is a term that does not sit too well with me so far, I need to look into that some more).
I’ll look for it – thanks, Barbara ๐
ps what are the specific wonders/strengths you are gifting your daughter with through Russian and Hebrew, Id’ be interested to learn as well (just having quoted your take on English which I have just quoted to someone else and wholeheartedly agree with).
I don’t quite understand your question… we read to her, speak with her, and attempt to teach her to read and write…
sure; but you qualified the English language meant loving complexity of truth – so suddenly , while doing something else, wondered what the other languages might mean…
oh no no – those were meant to be three separate things that I’m giving her
1) English, 2) open-mindedness, 3) love
(emoji light bulb – aha)
๐ก Barbara ๐ก
Very possibly, David ๐ I know Iโm not the one in control so…..
I’m always left with more confusion than anything else, Karima…
Shabbat shalom,
David