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d’Verse Open Link Night
For this most recent OLN at d’Verse, I’d like to share a poem that I wrote last August, nearly one year ago.
This is one of many pieces that I have written in an exploration of what is and what is not poetry. TBH with you, this question still leaves me confused; but, regardless, I really enjoyed creating this one!
I love the question, which by way of you philosophically answer with a not seeing, seeing but not really seeing, I feel that is the true human condition until we attend, become really present.
Wow, Paul. You really get it. ๐
-David
๐ Loved it David.
fun
๐ Basia, thanks! ๐
-David
How creative, David! Something new for me. ๐
๐ Terveen ๐ – it was entirely new for me too – I’d never written something like this before.
oh that was very cool๐๐
๐ Cindy ๐
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but they often fill in the blanks…(K)
โค Kerfe โค
This is fun and experimental: a bit of a Jackson Pollock poem, maybe?
๐ Ingrid ๐
Honestly, I have no idea – I had nobody in mind when I wrote this – I’m not well versed in art in poetry… but a friend of mine said it sort of reminds her of E. E. Cummings. I truly don’t know – it’s an entirely original piece of mine.
Shabbat shalom,
David
Entirely original is a good thing ๐คฉ
Gorgeously woven!! ๐
๐ค๐ค Sanaa ๐ค๐ค
This is just mind-scrambling! I donโt have a very concrete definition for Poetry but I definitely think this is a thoughtfully-crafted poem!
๐ D. ๐
An amazing piece, never seen by meโค๏ธ
๐ Kaushal ๐
Creative and fun! I particularly enjoyed how you mixed colors into single words — very clever ๐
โจ๐โจ Dave โจ๐โจ
phenomenal!!!!
๐ Awww… thanks, Lanna! ๐
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David
An inspiring wordplay in several ways sir
๐ฅฐ Thank you, David ๐ฅฐ
Shabbat shalom!