A concrete quadrille
burble whoosh STREAM trout turtle pebble swish THE turtle ripple crayfish AGAINST stonewort plankton algae GO bubble stonewort TO ripple rock snails rock TEND trout burble ripple ALWAYS whoosh bulrushes I REASON whoosh larvae SOME FOR crayfish splash BUT WHY crab KNOW DON’T I
The above free verse poem is my take on d’Verse’s Quadrille challenge #132.
The quadrille is simply a poem of 44 words (excluding the title), and it can take any form. This week’s challenge was to use the word “stream” in a quadrille.
95 thoughts on “Go with the flow? or: Hardly”
Took me a lifetime to understand this 😂 but yeah the comments helped me lot.
(My brain just cant comprehend this kind of amazing writings and wordplay)
A lifetime can go by really quickly, Jess 😉
Thank you for your kind comment! ❤
Wow! This is so cool 😀
💜 Thanks so much, Zoya 💜
It shows that no can stop stream of water, stream of thought, everything grow with natural existence.
❤ Sahdeo ❤
Quite cleverly done! ❤️❤️ I got the hidden message😉
Drat! I went through all that effort, and you saw right through me❣️