Lanturnes, or: Lanterns

lanturnes
are like half-size
American cinquains,
which resemble wider
lanterns

18 thoughts on “Lanturnes, or: Lanterns”

1. Space and depth, and space
   I see them within your words
   Opening up and diving deep

   1. 😍 Hamish 😍 – you’re very kind.

      Thank you so much,
      David

2. If you say so,it’s all lamps to me.

   1. 😉 Andrew 😉

3. Layers
   upon layers
   of more layers
   (K)

   1. Ain’t
      That the
      Simple truth
      Of all that we
      Know?

      1. It is.

4. Excellent, David. ❤️

   1. 💕💖 Jeff 💖💕

5. A very nicely done lanturne! And turned it into a concrete shape poem to boot!!

   1. 😂 technically it’s an American cinquain 😂

6. oh
   thanks for
   the intro
   to this cool form,
   dude

   1. My
      Pleasure.
      I learned of
      Sevenlings from
      You.

7. Nice one, David!

   1. 🏮 Lucy 🏮

8. So colourful lanterns , in Malaysia Chinese New Year time people lit the lamp inside and
   the top will be flown off 👌🌷🙏Such a beautiful view , Night up the sky it is flying 🌷🙏🌷

   1. I would so love to see that❣️

      🏮
      David

      1. Yes 😊so blissful 🙏🌷😊🌺

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