Sharks, or: Crustaceans

A ‘Waltz wave’

Chop-
py wat-
ers;
only
calm below
the sur-
face;
broken
planks drifting
high above sink-
ing, bluish
bodies;
can-
dela-
bra, wine bot-
tles rest
on
ocean
floor.

16 thoughts on “Sharks, or: Crustaceans”

  1. Choppy waters and chopped up words. πŸ˜† This structure does slow down the reading, which forces a deeper consideration of each word and more attention to the many sounds (and meanings) that can be found in one word. Interesting.

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