A free verse poem
No choice, he figured. No bullets but the one in his leg. No windows, no noise, no smoke. No way of knowing, but he wouldn't survive outside in the snow. "Hey! Anybody in there? Hello? I need shelter! Anybody there?" No response. As he pain- fully limped his way a- round to the front, he not- ed the absence of foot- prints in the snow. The cab- in seemed aban- doned, but he knocked any- way. No response. Pushing the door open, he entered, squinting through the darkness, when the bounty hunter fired, and a murder of crows scattered, squawking into the sky.
d’Verse poetics:
Outside looking in
For this d’Verse Poetics Prompt, we were to be voyeurs, peeping through windows and doors of a house that has no family connections and no memories of our own to call upon.
- Conjure an imaginary house of any size, any place, any age;
- Fill it with an imaginary person/people past or present; or ghosts; or leave it empty with its history’
- Make it literal but move into the metaphorical if you wish
If you find it hard to imagine, you may use a picture of a house (exterior or interior) and write an ekphrastic poem. Alternatively, you may select a house from your neighborhood; a historic place; or book or film, but reinvent its history, story, or narrative.
just absolute !
Thanks 🙂
I feel dark……WRITE MORE SUCH POEMS PLEASE! Again, reader’s request.. I just saw this poem.
And here’s a small poem dedicated to World Suicide Prevention Day:
thanks!
You’re welcome!Do write more such poems, I’d love to read them!
I really like this one. Why? Because it’s dark. You should write more of these. Reader’s request. 🙂
yeah, I’ve been having some dark moods recently… it’ll probably happen 🙂
Hope your mood has improved some.
Thanks, Funmi. That’s kind 🙂
I have ups and downs – just like anybody else… gradually, I’m learning to embrace my downs too…
❤
David
Nice wordplay. Just a couple of examples:
“…he pain-
fully limped his way a-
round to the front, he not-
ed the absence of foot-
prints”
“the bounty hunter
fired, and a murder
of crows scattered”
Well done, David.
😍 thanks so much, Ken 😍
You’re welcome, David.
Deadly poem. So much for home security!
ahahaha. I was sort of thinking of it as an abandoned cabin in the woods, Sean 😀
❤
David
Dramatic and suspenseful! Interesting structure too.
😘 Michele 😘
Hah, giving Glenn B a run for his money here. I half expected Buck to make an appearance.
😁 Thanks, Alexandra 😁
-David
Very nice scene-setting. I hope the bounty hunter missed, but it seems unlikely…
🤷♂️ Lisa 🤷♂️
thanks 🙂
David
You’re welcome.
Whoa such a great story in poetry David.
enticing, dramatic with a great punch ending.
👏👏👏
❤ Cindy ❤
thank you!
David