A tricube
If you could
pack all you
are into
Three boxes,
how would you
label them?
I always
start over
at the third.
Tricube rules:
- Each line contains three syllables.
- Each stanza contains three lines.
- Each poem contains three stanzas.
If you could
pack all you
are into
Three boxes,
how would you
label them?
I always
start over
at the third.
You do the Tricube so well! I’m really enjoying this set!
โค you're super kind, Muri โค
love this…
things to do I love
things to leave behind
refer to one and 2
Haha! Well done, Cindy โค
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David
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pack lightly and leave footprints.. xo ๐
I might choose the labels: “Dave’s Stuff” — “Don’t Mess With It” — “Seriously, I Mean It”
Awesomeโฃ๏ธ
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David
As for the three boxes: things to keep, thinks to donate, thinks to recycle. Great post David! ๐๐๐๐
excellent response, Filipa โค
-David
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We do it at home, at least, once a year.
Don’t wait too much…go for it! ๐๐ป๐
I have a propensity towards overthinking ๐
Me too David. It’s an eternal issue… ๐
๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ this is hilarious!
You are at it again!
๐ค Thanks, Jermena ๐ค
-David
Nice post and the lines also ๐๐my packing 1st I will put things on the box
write things names and will pack , then second and third boxes want to pack also
Same way only and donโt want to wait and think ๐๐๐ทโฅ๏ธ
thanks, Thattamma.
Most welcome ๐ท๐๐๐ท
Love it, and I really enjoy learning about new forms from you.
I’ve been on a poetry form discovery adventure for the past year! It’s super fun ๐
Thanks, Alice!
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David
Brilliant, again.
It’s funny to read this now. Last night I dreamt that I packaged myself into a box and sent myself to some remote village in my state. No idea where that dream came from.
๐คฃ Limp ๐คฃ
I like this form David. As usual you did a terrific job.
๐ Lauren ๐
past, present and future?
Or probably better good, bad and ugly ๐คฃ
๐ Pete ๐