A tricube
Sighs, grasping
at straws for
ideas
Every phrase
wooden and
ungainly
Then words hit
him like a
ton of bricks
Tricube rules:
- Each line contains three syllables.
- Each stanza contains three lines.
- Each poem contains three stanzas.
Sighs, grasping
at straws for
ideas
Every phrase
wooden and
ungainly
Then words hit
him like a
ton of bricks
The three pigs make a hilarious illustration for your clever poem, David. The tricube form looks fun to write! ๐ ๐ ๐
๐ Cheryl ๐
The tricube is fun… and this particular poem was especially fun for me!
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David
Brilliant!! I love your version of the story!!
โค thanks, Muri โค
Tricube. I like it. And sometimes that third stanza really is how searching for the right words happens isnโt it? Not quite right, not quite right, not quite right, then BAM. We find them.
Thank you again for another enlightening read. ๐
๐งก Hamish ๐งก
I really do love this form. I’m going to have to try a few of these myself.
do it! DO IT!
I will. Haha.
I love when words hit me like a ton of bricks. It doesn’t often happen these days.
Brilliant creative turn of phrase. Love itโค
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Lol, love the emoji reply, David!
This just described my writing style. ๐
That is TOO funny, Tina ๐
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David