A tricube
best viewed on blog (not WP reader)
| I am most empowered in English. |
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Считаю что русский тоже мой. |
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I feel that Russian is also mine. |
עברית, היא שייכת לעמי. |
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Hebrew, she belongs to my people. |
Tricube rules:
- Each line contains three syllables.
- Each stanza contains three lines.
- Each poem contains three stanzas.
The Skeptic's Kaddish 🇮🇱 
well planned … you had some homework there David. 👏👏👏
well, I do speak all of those languages – the tricky part was getting both the stanzas on the left and the stanzas on the right (in different languages) to fit the meter scheme… but it was fun 😀
❤
David
It looked tricky and I can see how it would be. Always clever❣️
I love it! Well penned. Love the color presentation too🌈
🙏🧸🙏 Suzette 🙏🧸🙏
I wanted to use a Polish alphabet and was stymied in the attempt. For the use of the Cyrillic script and the Hebrew font too, I like this poem. The content points to the fractured self image that I think happens to all individuals who must adapt to different cultures or customs…
yeah – I think it works well in this poem because each of my tongues has a different alphabet. It would be less interesting if I spoke English, Spanish, and French 😉