My 2nd atom poem
night
now upon
us all
savor
its calm
darks
drink
a hot tea
and be
be one
with the
words
Atom
- Three line stanzas=tercets;
- Count letters: 5-7-5;
- This form links tercets under title;
- No punctuation or capitalization.
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The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
A lovely and cozy picture.
Would like that for me. ๐
โ me too โ
Great one!I loved this one.
๐ Thanks, Quaran ๐
-David
A new form for me! The last 2 tercets are the one-two knockout punch! I’m floored!
it’s new to me too, of course, as are all these forms ๐
โค thanks, Muri โค
-David
Love this piece!โค๏ธ
๐ฅฐ thanks so much, Grace ๐ฅฐ
-David
My pleasure.๐
I like this very much. โ๏ธ๐ต๐๐โจ
โจ๐คโจ Lia โจ๐คโจ