An atom poem
light
morning
skies
ideas
flicker
again
moved
to share
today
as the
pale orb
harks
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The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
Very good.
๐ Raghav, thanks! ๐
-David
David, I remember marveling at the daytime moon as a young child. Its magic never wanes. The photo and the poem are both gorgeous and inspiring. Have a great day! โค
๐ Cheryl, you too! ๐
Every time I see the moon in the morning sky, I think of a description in a short story by Flannery O’Connor: “The pale, useless moon.” That’s always stuck with me for some reason. Great poem, David ๐
I’ll see if I can find it online…