An atom poem
light
morning
skies
ideas
flicker
again
moved
to share
today
as the
pale orb
harks
Atom
- Three line stanzas=tercets;
- Count letters: 5-7-5;
- This form links tercets under title;
- No punctuation or capitalization.
light
morning
skies
ideas
flicker
again
moved
to share
today
as the
pale orb
harks
The pale orb is quite an inspiring force.
Lovely. 🙂
🌚 Terveen 🌚
Well done and very evocative is so few syllables and words!
💞 thanks, Muri 💞
Beautiful, as always, David. ❤❤
💖 thanks, Jeff 💖
Good 👍
🙃 I aim to please 🙃
Great atom poem.
💚 Quaran 💚
Liking the Atom!
Leo, me too!
❤
David
Haiku for the monosyllabic? lol
atoms
are just
lttrs
Beautiful, David
❤ you're very kind, Lauren ❤
thank you,
David
Wow. It’s so beautiful. Loved it
💓 Aanchal, thank you 💓
-David
Wonderful! ✨
💗 Paula 💗
Oh it’s beautiful! Simple few lines but reading it creates a beautiful aura! Loved it! ❤️
And hey, I’ve nominated you further for the Sunshine Blogger Award with my set of questions. Will be very eagerly waiting for your answers to them!
Thank you so much, Ahiri – you’re very kind! Unfortunately, I don’t participate in blogger awards, but I truly appreciate your nomination.
Yours,
David
Oh! That’s alright ben ❤️!!
And thanks for your kind words ❤️
You are welcome 🙂
BTW, please feel free to call me ‘David’ because that is my first name. The word ‘ben’ means ‘son of’ in Hebrew. I know my pen name is confusing… I’m sorry!
💖
David
Oh okay! Actually I wasn’t really in knowing terms with Hebrew 😊!
Well fine, David 😉!
And hey! Don’t say sorry.. here’s nothing to feel sorry about 😊
❤ Ahiri ❤
-David
When Betelgeuse goes supernova, it will be almost as luminous as the moon.
you just happen to know that offhand, Rosliw? 😄
-David
My head is crammed with useless information. There’s a group of hopeful skywatchers who speculated we’ll get to see Betelgeuse go supernova next year, because it recently dimmed. But, the general consensus holds that the dimming was a cyclical event that occasionally happens to Betelgeuse, and that Betelgeuse will explode anytime within the next hundred thousand years. I had been in the hopeful camp, but I’m not an astronomer of any stripe or caliber. I just think it’s cool that there’s a small chance the moon might have some competition for a few months within in our lifetimes.
super duper interesting❣️