Light, or: Pale

light
morning
skies

ideas
flicker
again

moved
to share
today

as the
pale orb
harks

36 thoughts on “Light, or: Pale”

1. The pale orb is quite an inspiring force.
   Lovely. 🙂

   1. 🌚 Terveen 🌚

2. Well done and very evocative is so few syllables and words!

   1. 💞 thanks, Muri 💞

3. Beautiful, as always, David. ❤❤

   1. 💖 thanks, Jeff 💖

4. Good 👍

   1. 🙃 I aim to please 🙃

5. Great atom poem.

   1. 💚 Quaran 💚

6. Liking the Atom!

   1. Leo, me too!

      ❤
      David

7. Haiku for the monosyllabic? lol

   1. atoms
      are just
      lttrs

8. Beautiful, David

   1. ❤ you're very kind, Lauren ❤

      thank you,
      David

9. Wow. It’s so beautiful. Loved it

   1. 💓 Aanchal, thank you 💓

      -David

10. Wonderful! ✨

    1. 💗 Paula 💗

11. Oh it’s beautiful! Simple few lines but reading it creates a beautiful aura! Loved it! ❤️

    And hey, I’ve nominated you further for the Sunshine Blogger Award with my set of questions. Will be very eagerly waiting for your answers to them!

    1. Thank you so much, Ahiri – you’re very kind! Unfortunately, I don’t participate in blogger awards, but I truly appreciate your nomination.

       Yours,
       David

       1. Oh! That’s alright ben ❤️!!
          And thanks for your kind words ❤️

          1. You are welcome 🙂

             BTW, please feel free to call me ‘David’ because that is my first name. The word ‘ben’ means ‘son of’ in Hebrew. I know my pen name is confusing… I’m sorry!

             💖
             David

             1. Oh okay! Actually I wasn’t really in knowing terms with Hebrew 😊!
                Well fine, David 😉!

                And hey! Don’t say sorry.. here’s nothing to feel sorry about 😊

             2. ❤ Ahiri ❤

                -David

12. When Betelgeuse goes supernova, it will be almost as luminous as the moon.

    1. you just happen to know that offhand, Rosliw? 😄

       -David

       1. My head is crammed with useless information. There’s a group of hopeful skywatchers who speculated we’ll get to see Betelgeuse go supernova next year, because it recently dimmed. But, the general consensus holds that the dimming was a cyclical event that occasionally happens to Betelgeuse, and that Betelgeuse will explode anytime within the next hundred thousand years. I had been in the hopeful camp, but I’m not an astronomer of any stripe or caliber. I just think it’s cool that there’s a small chance the moon might have some competition for a few months within in our lifetimes.

          1. super duper interesting❣️