Sweet, or: Savory

An atom poem

heart
pumping
blood

I feel
it pulse
in you

you’re
flushed
coral

oh yes
dearest
my pet

I know
what you
crave

sweet
talk and
licks

I love
teasing
you so

you’re
so so wet
there

that’s
a savory
taste

it’s my
piquant
treat

Atom

  • Three line stanzas=tercets;
  • Count letters: 5-7-5;
  • This form links tercets under title;
  • No punctuation or capitalization.

d’Verse: A quadrille

The above atom poem is my take on d’Verse’s Quadrille challenge #134.

The quadrille is simply a poem of 44 words (excluding the title), and it can take any form. This week’s challenge was to use the word “heart” in a quadrille.

76 thoughts on “Sweet, or: Savory”

  1. Oo-er David – you went a little saucy here! Love your teasing hints at eroticism, and how you wove the quadrille into another form!

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