A shadorma
Arbitrar- y, even unnat- ural, so they say, Dear Shadorma, whereas I find elegance in you.
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The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
You have a wonderful knack for words and expression. Beauty everywhere. ๐
Awwww, thanks, Terveen
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David
Beautiful poem and beautiful lady
Indeedโฃ๏ธ
aha another new form for me, thanks David … the colour and her smile, simply beautiful!
โค thanks so much, Kate โค
my pleasure!
I’ve always liked the Shadorma. Some liken it to the Haiku but It feels less restricted. And that gives me some wiggle room! I’m too set in my ways to make word breaks but you made it work beautifully!
really? you never use word breaks, Muri? for some reason, that surprises me…
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David
I love the pic with this one. And I love the name of the poem style! And I love the poem. You make her elegant. :))
โค thanks, Lia โค
(but she’s elegant even without my help!)
IKR??!! I was just smacking my own head. ๐คฆ๐ผโโ๏ธ True that! I did not word it right at all. Ah me, words fail to express what I mean. ๐ Sometimes I feel they are mean! But it is only my inability to say or see what is, rather than just what seems. ๐ฉ
I took it as a great compliment, especially coming from you – no worries โค
Well I thank you kindly. :)) Also for saying something honest directly, which gave me the opportunity to attempt to right my wrong. In this world, that is something. ๐
Beautiful lines.
๐ Thank you, Shashi ๐
Sincerely,
David
Good one!And btw, what’s a Shardoma?
just click on the word “shadorma” at the top of the post – it’s a link ๐