Eye, or: The beholder

A shadorma

crack words o-
pen, peel off the syl-
lables, flake
by flake, like
brilliant, beckoning, frac-
tured, magical eggs

Terveen Gill August 31, 202112:18 Reply

I’d like a wordy omelette with lots of cheesy ideas.
That doesn’t sound too right. Lol. 🙂
1. ben Alexander August 31, 202112:35 Reply
  
  and veggies! 🍅🌶️🍄🧅🧄🍠🥔
kenhume79 August 30, 202101:50 Reply

What a wonderful picture and description of the process of writing you’ve just penned there David! 😁😁 Bravo! 👏👏
1. ben Alexander August 30, 202101:51 Reply
  
  Thanks so much Ken 🙂
  (the pic is from the WP library)
  1. kenhume79 August 30, 202111:00 Reply
    
    Oh cool. But what I meant was the picture you painted with your words. 😁❤️
    1. ben Alexander August 30, 202111:01 Reply
      
      🤦 oooooooohh!
murisopsis August 29, 202121:58 Reply

A delightful description of composing a poem!!
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202122:01 Reply
  
  I even colored the words in 🤓
Quaranjavirus August 29, 202119:25 Reply

Nice one!
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202119:33 Reply
  
  thanks 🙂
Limp Cabbage and Soggy Chips August 29, 202117:22 Reply

“frac-
tured, magical eggs”

Brilliant simile.
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202117:29 Reply
  
  ❤ thanks, Limp! ❤
  
  -David