I’ll be down soon! or: Dinner time

Posted on August 29, 2021August 29, 2021 by ben Alexander

A shadorma

sexual
curiosity...
   erotic
fantasies
anticipatorily
accelerating

Note

For this particular shadorma, I set myself the arbitrary limitation of one word per line.

19 thoughts on “I’ll be down soon! or: Dinner time”

Terveen Gill August 31, 202112:21 Reply

So much meaning in one word per line.
Hot and steamy. Very effective. 🙂
1. ben Alexander August 31, 202112:38 Reply
  
  well, I was a teenager once… 😉
Quaranjavirus August 30, 202109:36 Reply

Sexual curiosity?Looks like its going a bit out of my reading range 😂😂😂. But very well written!
1. ben Alexander August 30, 202109:52 Reply
  
  When I wrote this, I was imagining a boy going through puberty 🙂
murisopsis August 29, 202116:23 Reply

Hehe! It reminds me why I started throwing away the Victoria’s Secret catalogues once I discovered them squirreled away by the 11 yr old! hehe – those were the days!
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202116:23 Reply
  
  I remember hiding them from my Mom…
filipamoreiradacruz August 29, 202111:42 Reply

I guess dinner can wait… 😉
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202112:59 Reply
  
  yeah… but how long will mother wait?
  1. filipamoreiradacruz August 29, 202113:16 Reply
    
    That’s a good question. 🤣🤣😂😂 My husband is the one that cooks and when he says “à table” we don’t waste time because he’s an excellent chef. 👌🏻👨‍🍳
Diana August 29, 202105:33 Reply

Great form.. you are a poetry expert, now! ❤
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202108:57 Reply
  
  😳 thanks, Diana 😳
jonicaggiano August 29, 202103:03 Reply

I love the style and the poem David. Well done. Truth be known reading the comments are a hoot David and extremely entertaining. Blessings to you and your family. 🤗
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202103:11 Reply
  
  💛 Joni 💛
  
  I’m in it for the human interactions myself – that’s the best part of writing poetry on WP!
  
  Thanks!
  David
  1. jonicaggiano August 29, 202117:09 Reply
    
    I do love the community it is wonderful and supportive. I am also trying to get published and I have been quite a bit too. I never would have thought I would but now I am a National and internationally published poet. I started trying to publish my work as a very young girl. So this is like a dream come true for me. Who knows you may start to publish too. I started to try and give back to the Adult Children Of Alcoholics. Now I am an addicted blogger. Sending lots of love. ❤️🤗😘🦋
    1. ben Alexander August 29, 202117:16 Reply
      
      TBH, I haven’t really tried to get published at all… I’m not entirely sure what the point would be for me.
      1. jonicaggiano August 29, 202117:24
        
        You should do it. You will see. It just feels wonderful. If you have something you write that you want to share with a broader audience I say do it. It feels like an accomplishment. You will see. Hugs David. Sending y’all my love. ❤️❤️
lssattitudeofgratitude August 29, 202102:05 Reply

computer
driving me crazy
shutting tabs
won’t respond
I think it might be haunted
I sure hope not though
1. ben Alexander August 29, 202102:16 Reply
  
  gosh! that would
  be annoying to
  deal with, but
  what if the
  ghost is kind and sociable?
  you might become friends…
  1. lssattitudeofgratitude August 29, 202102:19 Reply
    
    My friend Maggie helped me box in the evil one. We had to disable the touch screen. Now I him swiping a screen that does not respond. I am afraid the genie might come out of I poke the screen too often. LOL